Sorrow Comments

'Now, I could make out who you were. As I met you in me face to face' - the last two lines leave much for us to ponder over! A nice poem.

Well done.Enjoy your lovely love-lyric. It speaks of the unification of feeling. The theme is the universal recognition of the soul of the lover.

Sorrows in life abound well documented in this great poem...life is so short no time must be wasted only giving love ans spreading happiness around is the key to a happy life..regards

A song becomes sweetest when it tells of some saddest thought according to Keats. Finally you comprehend the shape of destiny, the predestined fate. Shakespeare has said, There is destiny in the fall of a sparrow. The wonderful thing is, your great talent to go on writing lines on this title. Cheers!

I carefully read the poem in its spirit of sorrow and extreme reality of real life and the final oblivion of nature and the human life. The inequalities, the poverty stricken beggar and his helplessness for a meal, the predicament of rain which the poet sees as the tears of sky all are beautifully narrated and included in this little poem in page but thoughtful in length and breadth of time and again in the journey of life where lot of pessimism is dragged us and the living being have to cope with the situation of last journey even if his or her performance in perfect and good or bad which only can say by the real judgement of the unknown truth and destiny awaits it I think. Anyhow the poem is very beautifully carved which creates and inborn pessimism and actually I felt it in that sense of sorrow emotion.

Sorrows are bitter no doubt but can not be avoided. this is the part of life. plz do read my poem banks of a river. it is short. thnx.

Poignantly written. The flair for words and rhythmic flow of the words impressed me. The in-depth longing and the search for meaning for the tears are expressed beautifully. I was touched by your sincerity to reach out. Great poem!

Wonderful and I feel and know your'e pain. Thanks :) Keep writing!

loveeeddd your lines, they are painfull yet innovative. come to my page and read my poems. hope you'll come thanks!

Painful thoughts Painted in red Hard to heal And unanswered -Nice penning- I like it