Sorrow; Love lost with sadden words
Lost hope with tears that burst
Twisted happiness, that sometimes hurt
Sorrow; A sentiment that makes one tear
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Different aspects of pain and sorrow are beautifully defined in the thought provoking poem. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.9 points.
Melissa, your choice of words offer a harsh and griping assessment on the concept of sorrow as personified by the overwhelming encounters the subject of the writing has endured. In many ways I can relate, which makes your words all the more poignant. I sincerely hope you are not the subject you have written about. And if you are, I wish I could reach through this monitor and offer you a big hug to comfort you. Thank you for sharing, Melissa! [rating: 10]
R B Seals, your feedback and thoughtful comment is very appreciated. Thank you for your rating.