Sorrow Comments

I stand on a cliff Should I take a leap? My eyes kept closed because Fire is making them wet! I swim in the river of pain! These are the points i collected from your beautiful poem. Thank you for your thoughts, imaginations and the brilliance of your mind A great poem. Wonderful expressions in imagination….. pain you have expressed very well my dear poet. Thank you. tony

I feel the Sorrow in your words, I hope that life smiles upon you.

Beautifully written Ketan for such youth. Keep up the great work.

I do like the way that you express the feeling-I cannot do so; thereby, wishing you to teach me about that ;) Keep writing, Hukare!

Expressive and truly impressive poem it is Master Ketan. Make yourself optimistic and think beyond the immediate circles. Your sorrow will soon fade out. All the best ahead