Soporific Satges Of Mind Poem by Prabir Gayen

Soporific Satges Of Mind

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Soporific Stages of Mind

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Words are loose with no harmonious bond,
Mind is lost in mindless Joy,
Pain is useless without pleasure,
The Sun of life is severely cold,
I am lost somewhere in my emptiness,
Half of my soul is doomed to death,
Without body I live within the shadow of my former self,
A flickering flame that is Not,
Life is a joyless graveyard,
A sepulchre of tuneless idyll,
Past with all it's declines is sweet to dream,
Reclining on the false that is gone forever,
Life is a subtle Joy for hope to munch on,
All hopes are frazzle to lead the mind to absolute langour,
Life is a limited space attached to langshne,
All effort is useless and Unscriptural to relive the past,
Eternal winter with no wink of the Sun,
A deep somnambulism with no urge to live within and without.

Soporific Satges Of Mind
Sunday, December 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 December 2019

A poem of great depth that conveys a meaningful message. " Eternal winter with no wink of the Sun" . Beautiful line from a beautiful poem.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 23 December 2019

A really striking poem. An optimistic note hidden in the pessimistic lines.....

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Savita Tyagi 22 December 2019

the moments of despair and hopelessness are well expressed. Life is a subtle joy for hope to munch on.......on the note of that hope I wish you a very happy holidays and and a happy newyear.

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Sandra Feldman 22 December 2019

Depression and emptiness could not be better expressed. It really hits hard in this beautiful poem. As we feel the truth about our flimsy existence and our fragile lives.

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