Wednesday, May 2, 2007

Sooooo Hot Comments

Rating: 5.0

You know it's hot
When the ocean water
No longer quenches
Parched skin
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Dee Daffodil
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Chris Mendros 27 July 2007

Yes, it is, and so apropos today. I can feel the sweat form and drip- oh, wait, that's really there. Great poem.

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This poem is 'soo hot' I had to turn the air conditioner way up. respectfully yours, 'not ruining my bad name' enjoyed reading

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Ted Sheridan 12 May 2007

Paris Hilton couldn't have said it any better....nothing is as hot as a woman's belly button filled up with sweat. I better go before I start thinking about it.

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Geoff Warden 04 May 2007

DEE DEE DEE........humidity is just too........... an this poetic little hot cake needs water.........

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Diane Violet 02 May 2007

Somehow I don't think you're talking about the humidity....sizzling write Dee! All the best, Diane

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Zen Bojczuk 02 May 2007

Wow Dee... and I thought you didn't do erotica. :) Zen

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You've left me sweating and panting. I couldn't get rid of the sweats so I got rid of the pants! Ez

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Ooh, wot a scorcher! :) t x

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Woooooooooosh! ..Just smoke-out my P.C. wires why dont'cha' lass? ! .lol! I like this a lot, but must concur with Mr. Allen, directly below me, here..... FjR

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Barry Van Allen 02 May 2007

Dee, Didn't they ever teach you not to tease the animals in the zoo? B.V.A.

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