Saturday, November 14, 2009

Soon Or Later Comments

Rating: 5.0

Soon or later
These efforts of mine
Will be forgotten
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Patti Masterman 14 November 2009

I enjoyed the way the lines sort of flowed to their own time, just like life following it's own agendas, in the lines. This is quite good. Your writing is morphing into something miraculous and I get to watch it happen. (no I'm not trying to jinx you!) smile

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Joseph Poewhit 14 November 2009

Like the two feet of time plodding

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