Friday, June 15, 2007

Sonnet Xx: Garden Of The Heart Comments

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Splendid verdant form awakes at dawn of day
with crowning gift offered gracefully on high,
to touch the promise of cresting suns ray...
A floral offering to fathomless sky.
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walt martin
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Fizah Jasni 19 August 2007

wow...I'm glad I came across this poem. It's really nice....

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Sandra Fowler 28 July 2007

This sonnet has a certain time out of mind quality. you write with an eloquent pen. Warm regards, Sandra

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Not a member No 4 08 July 2007

And the blossoms of this poem reflect that of the garden they depict. A poemscape of great beauty and quality throughout. If your gardening is on a par with your writing then it will be a sight to behold!

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Bell Song 26 June 2007

Very sensuous use of language Walt, your poem has a jewel like beauty.

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Lillian J. 15 June 2007

Grand work sparklingly alive with imagery! Lilly :)

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