Friday, March 8, 2013

Sonnet - X (When I Am Gone Do Not, My Love, Lament) Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I am gone do not, my love, lament
For I shall find a gentler resting place
Beneath the stars where I shall lie content
Sweet solitude forever to embrace
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Valerie Dohren
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Smoky Hoss 12 March 2013

What a great, passionate plea; all wrapped in such beauty. Superb poetry.

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Danny Draper 12 March 2013

A beautiful poem of passion and care for the media and its heritage. And a desire to go down kicking and screaming as the last words are testament in the last line. A delight. Thank you.

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Valsa George 10 March 2013

. With life's completed scroll forever furled ….. I'll wave contempt and scorn upon the world Wow! I simply love these lines, Valerie! !

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Dave Walker 09 March 2013

A beautiful sonnet, pulls at the heart.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 March 2013

Ah wow its great to b bac frm my travels n to b readin such enchanting poems too. U make a fine sonneteer dear. I esp admire d line about ancient trees, very poetic i must say.

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Though the sonnet is to be appreciated for its powerful theme that has an appeal to your beloved, I am bound to tell you the beloved of yours have a reason to lament as they simply love you wherever your resting place is going to be ultimately.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 08 March 2013

A beautiful sonnet, Valerie! I have no words to express my admiration for your great write! Simply great!

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