Wednesday, December 13, 2006

Sonnet: When God Is Angered… Comments

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The Lord protects His righteous souls always;
The Hand of God will be against their foes;
He keenly watches them with intent gaze;
He knows the time to mitigate their woes!
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Dr John Celes
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Joe Breunig 13 December 2006

An enjoyable write; nicely done. One small suggestion - replace 'Ensnared are evil minds' with 'Captured are evil minds' since the line ends with the word snares.

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