Sonnet Viii- A Letter From My Beloved Comments

A heartwarming, romantic and charming letter from one so dear. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Lovely poem. Its very touch. Great job. Your very good. (:

The remarkable feature of the poem is your focus on it, as sonnet form is rightly chosen for the theme, supported by appropriate images...like Hebrides image is much suitable more than any modern scale of distances, a letter image coming through the sea, the exclamation of excitement and joy...it's Shakespearean in composition with 3 stanzas with alternate rhyme, ending in a closed couplet...my suggestion is to edit and remove the dots which apparently have no reason...in punctuation if you still want to use them then use only 3 dots...just a humble suggestion for such beautiful poetry!

Wow! A truly deep write why not it is for the beloved. Love your ink.

Wow! sounds like Wordsworth.Praiseworthy....

Thanks everyone for your appreciation and feedback- Yash Shinde

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How nice would it be if in the the end you wrote glossary. That said, the journey through this sonnet one is carried to the ages of serenity, peace and purity where virginity abounds. Your romantic flights definitely refresh my mind. Thanks for sharing dear.

just luvd the emotions you filled with your words..

beautiful representation of d emotions......

very niceeeeeeeeee fantastic fabulous

A beautiful write again, well done Yash_Soul

I enjoyed this. It has an ancient feel to it. Almost as if I am reading it on weathered paper. I love the line about her seraph hands. Beautiful imagery.

Lovely indeed Edward, very nice younger brother.

Lovely! great piece of work from you. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

Another very good write, I'll be reading all your work in due course.

Great vocab. And you could create a good feel.. Way to go.. God bless! :)

Oh, a question, what does Hebrides mean?