Sonnet Vi-The Fantasy Of My Dreams Comments

A beautiful dream in a beautiful poem.....................10

amazing. Showing beautiful imagery. I love and enjoy reading this poem. Fantastic Job! (:

Lost in a dream land.....! You have beautifully presented your fantasy, Yash!

Thanks everyone for your appreciation and feedback- Yash Shinde

this is very good i especially like the ending!

a beautiful poem.. Just luvd it..

The fantasy has a glow, it has a rare tale to tell and the imagination is quite superb. The area of caution is that beware of her! As none can understand why man is obsessed with woman while she is not so with him, youngsters have to remain a bit distant from the nymphs, the fairies and the angels alike. Keep writing dear Shinde.

i don't think you need any guidance you seem to know what you are doing. :)

Young poet power! Nice poem, I liked how you woke up because of the sun, dont worry, I will destroy it soon. xD overall, it was great. Thanks for letting me read it.

Like being lost in a dream looking for that elusive beauty.

this is a pretty write for a young poet like you. keep up. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s

this is a pretty write for a young poet like you. keep up. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s

this is a pretty write for a young poet like you. keep up. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s

A very lyrical write. Great work. Fine balane of mood and language.

A beautiful poem, great imagination.

Very nice. well rhymed and the eagerness for her made this poem a dream-poem.

Musical isn't it. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing

Wonderful imagery, so original, great write!

And I searched her As she hid behind the stars Tried to catch her Before, she could go far is this my fav line..lil keep it write i like ur new style go ahead...

This is really good, a wonderful poem, a pleasure to read