Sunday, February 17, 2013

Sonnet - Vi (O Gentle Heart, Hold Fast To All Thy Dreams) Comments

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O gentle heart, hold fast to all thy dreams
Mind them ever safe within thy keeping
For love may never render what it deems
Nor save the fragile breast from ever weeping.
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Valerie Dohren
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Ray Quesada 26 March 2013

Really good poem, Val. I'm sure i've said it before, you have great style, and you take your craft seriously.

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Unwritten Soul 24 February 2013

Always not disappointing me nor others, i just feel the cheerfulness within..just let everything smiles on me haha_Soul

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Dave Walker 22 February 2013

A fantastic poem, we must all remember that dreams can come true.

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Valsa George 17 February 2013

Life may not be that sweet as we deem it to be, still hold fast to all our dreams and fantasies and hope our dreams will fruition tomorrow.. tomorrow.....! ! Beautiful, Valerie! !

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Heather Wilson 17 February 2013

Nice one Val, I guess dreams help us all at some time , even though many turn out to be just fantasies and illusions.

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