Sonnet Vi: I Love You Comments
I am so very much in love that I
Can’t imagine how to describe it all
There’s the passionate fire I feel inside,
And there’s the love that made my wall to fall.
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Thanks Herbert and Janice. Also, I think the word 'to' flows better and it says more to. Thanks though.
You're getting really good at these sonnets! I like how they are shaping up...A ten for sure Hugs Jan
Excellent Sandra. Small suggestion. Changing the word to in the 4th line to 'just' may be what you want to say? H
a lovely love poem sonnet, full of joy a beautiful change a peacful change With a warmth allan
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Very tender and beautiful. I do love this form. Excellent. Chrissie