Sunday, February 10, 2013

Sonnet - V (O Faithless Heart, What Sorrow Thou Dost Weave...) Comments

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O faithless heart, what sorrow thou dost weave,
For those betrayed shall forthwith be undone -
As by thy will thou ever thus deceive,
And therefore with thy guile conceal the sun.
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Valerie Dohren
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Captain Cur 27 April 2013

Used as a dubious move a disingenuous simple smile can hide the truth behind a heart checkered with black guile. But White is pure as springtimes lure and will open up the gate and destroy the guile behind the smile of a black heart checkered mate.

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Joseph Anderson 12 February 2013

Excellant-A rare gem that Shakespeare would surely envy, I kid you not.A love sonnet fot the ages. Flawless and ever so beautiful. That infernal code syatem is really fouling up my comments

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Lyn Paul 12 February 2013

O Valerie O Valerie a romantic write.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 11 February 2013

In commemoration of Valentines Day a righteous Sonnet in traditional style.!

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Valsa George 11 February 2013

A poem affirming the need to maintain the fidelty in love, written in the style of the Elizabethan stalwarts of poets! ! A wonderful dedication for Valentine's day! !

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Heather Wilson 10 February 2013

A heartfelt well written traditional poem Val, very rare these days.

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Dave Walker 10 February 2013

A very beautiful poem with a wonderful flow. Really well put together.

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