Sonnet V-Almighty's All Seeing Eyes........... Comments

A Fabulous write with indepth meaning. People wear a mask thereby hiding their real face to the world. Under cover of mask he may tell lies, cheat others just for his own benefit. But a day will come when his mask will be torn on the final day of judgment of his life. Where justice will be done none other than Almighty, from which no one can escape. Yes, a day will come in everyone's life when one will be judged. Beautiful presentation. I loved it.

i'm amazed after seeing the date of the post..The Almighty's living in the skies is an innocent idea...! so true a poem!

Beautiful poem. no one hides to see God eyes. His the reason we are here and we should thank him ever day we survive. (:

Thanks everyone for your appreciation and feedback- Yash Shinde

No one hides from His eyes. Live a meaningful life. Thank you for a nice poem.

When we all wear masks to hide our real identity and to suit to the situation, we may be able to fool our fellow men.... but how can we hide ourselves from the all seeing eyes of God? .... A great sonnet, Yash!

Beautiful write Yash. God bless you

Another fabulous frm u poem on d Gr8 Allseeing God! Wow!

This's ineffable! I keep thinking of your age, wondering and it just baffles me... You write so well yet, you're so young. I hope to see more of your thought provoking poems. Keep it up! You can go anywhere with what you've got.

.... the Almighty you refer to is an image of solace or illusion? 13 billion years ago the universe originated and life began here over only3 billion years ago. What remains as the greatest mystery is man`s concern over the 'cosmic power' of his imagination that did not interfere with or involve in the life of dinosaurs or the microbes till the ape turned into man around 25 thousand years ago. Man`s civilisation was initially and essentially improved by the fears pertaining to the unknown.But in today`s world of transparent realities the notion of a God supervising the human life is quite debatable... The all seeing eyes miss the universal hunger, neglect of the have-nots and misery of women and children. When belief in God becomes a choice of the mind, the stand of a poet may preferably be a lot far from the themes paradoxical and much dealt with from times immemorial. As poetry is the luxury of an idle mind at times, similar writes may give us a break....

Wow...... Loved this one yash! !

Very well written and so truthfull, well done.

nice one i think you have done good work hope you have enjoyed a lot, as I did. cheers Once again thumbs up for you

wow its great a very true poem and well written :)

But, while he trespassed against others, he forgot the one who lives in the skies i loved these lines. a very nice poem by a very nice poet! thanks for share!

So no matter how harder a man tries Can never, ever hide from almighty's eyes………….. This is an moot question. May be I am wrong but seeing the events occur now-a- days around us it appears that the creature whom HE created has become more 'intelligent' than the creator may be for the worse which time will tell. And yet the sod, not complete Will continue to grow till he thrives.........................still there is hope. Your observation of the surroundings is nice thought provoking and you have captured the negative essence of the society beautifully. Thanks for

Well written, good rhyming.

Yash, keep it up my little dear, this is a good poem and has a great words on world and real life...Such Innocent thing in you make things sound wonderful..liked it_Soul

very impressed with your expression and insight.. lovely.. enjoyed

But the real face yet to be unfurled Which lies hidden under the sod of lies. I think that this is the wrong perception that you have upon the people, though you speak of the universal truth. Could you please write down specifically what you actually meant by this and how can you prove it? . Please don't send me any private email.