Spring—efflorescence and fecundity;
When seeds are sprouting into verdant life
From any piece of ground: in liberty
Emerging fresh through concrete and asphalt,
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From any forgotten piece of ground, in liberty Emerging fresh through concrete and asphalt: You have captured the vibrancy of the spring season in this delightful poem. Each line is a VISUAL DELIGHT. Certainly 10+++
Awesome poem.... I quote from your poem....10 When creatures of earth awaken from hibernation Invigorated, are parading at Spring's Festivity; And dreams of love are shinning in the glowing sun, Fluttering like butterflies upon the human soul.
This poem reads like spring. What pleasant thoughts! (10)
A wonderful sonnet....loved it. Top score! !