Wednesday, August 21, 2013

Sonnet On Tears Comments

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Tears fall on shoulders and cracks in eyelids
As I stand and watch you smiling so hard.
Weeping at happiness, as I tell fibs
To my naive self, my chest burning barred
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George Price
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Manonton Dalan 21 January 2016

can't do nothing but drool..nice

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Mike Barrett 30 December 2013

Interesting. Touching. When living in the now does one not feel as he feels? I suppose one could feel not quite knowing how you should feel, but I find this a bit confusing in that the mind is getting in the way of the feeling, or vice versa. Me, I don't mentalize feelings, they are what they are and I accept them as such. Acting on feelings is however quite another thing, there the mind is engaged before any action is or is not taken. Good write. an 8+.

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Terry O'leary 22 August 2013

Very nice, well constructed, poignant... Terry

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