Monday, August 19, 2013

Sonnet On R Comments

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I saw you sitting at a bar last night,
Sipping drinks, laughing softly as you do,
And not looking up, not seeing me write
Of your smiling eyes, your dress so blue,
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George Price
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Mike Barrett 28 December 2013

Touching. I enjoyed the write, its sentimentality with still a touch of longing. Good work. If so moved check out my poem, Requitement Sought, I believe it was written in my late teens, very early 20s. Cheers & best wishes for the coming New Year.

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