Sunday, February 3, 2008

Sonnet: On Prayer Comments

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The pow’r of prayer can astonish you;
Through prayer, we can speak to God each day.
There isn’t a thing that prayer cannot do!
A miracle can happen, if you pray.
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Dr John Celes
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Lucianne Fasolo 03 February 2008

Very nicely done. The couplet was a great ending. Perfect meter, by the way, :) Good job.

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Meggie Gultiano 03 February 2008

nicely done..nicely said..Amen and amen to this, Dr. John

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Chris Mendros 03 February 2008

'Saying a prayer is a faithful’s art! ' -and an art it is, we get better w/ practice. 'A prayer breaks sin’s invisible wall! ' -a power too great for some to approach. Well-crafted, well-worded, and thought provoking. Nice work.

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