Sonnet On A 'lost Love' Comments

Deep passionate feelings written with clarity of thought and mind. Beautiful love poem nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Indranil.

Those magic bestowed eye May let a hundred hearts fly! It didn't shoo my heart to fly! It did encage thy heart to cry, The tear I shed in love for thee Tear that embrace but no lie. began gloriously and now at the end..........? ? ? experience, love, attraction, infatuation, fall, waking up, sitting up now, lost in thoughts.......... so many thoughts came up in my mind as i read your poem.... thank you my dear poet. you are great. tony

Now i am here sitting alone! Thanks for sharing.

t didn't shoo my heart to fly! It did encage thy heart to cry, The tear I shed in love for thee Tear that embrace but no lie beautiful expressions of love love and life and love as a mystery. thank you dear poet. tony