The seasons have an order-
The way they appear
on the planet, we dwell.
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Part One. Yes! Yes! Yes! ! ! ! ! You nailed this yes yes yes! It begins with a season / hot, dry, thirsty / feeding on nectar of hope- - -gorgeous! ! ! Rains shower like / a for life, - - ] powerful and full of impact due to your comparison! ! !
Part Two. Dew Knocks so gently / on the door of the dawn- - - - ] the entire stanza follows this lead into such beauty. I swear this is the best poem you've written! It is absolutely filled with the loveliness and individuality of each season! 10+++++++++++ and onto my fav list! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
THE FLOW of ur poetry is exceptionally exceptional ' it flows like the ' HOLY GANGES just lovely
I love this outstanding write with the beauty of every line, every word, your vision of the seasons is breathtakingly beautiful and thank you for sharing. Your poem is one of my favourites!
Thanks dear Hazel for these lovely and gracious remarks. Many thanks for the deep love you have shown for my poems.
Well expressive poem on seasons and life. Touching and haunting. I quote..... The many hued Earth Sings the myriad songs of life, each painted with an unique and elegant Colour of love, With a note of perennial promise, the cuckoo starts singing round the clock from within the grooves. Beautiful poem shared.10
I agree with Kumarmani Mahakul