Friday, April 27, 2018

Sonnet Of Poems-14: The Seasons That Speak Comments

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The seasons have an order-
The way they appear
on the planet, we dwell.
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 May 2018

Well expressive poem on seasons and life. Touching and haunting. I quote..... The many hued Earth Sings the myriad songs of life, each painted with an unique and elegant Colour of love, With a note of perennial promise, the cuckoo starts singing round the clock from within the grooves. Beautiful poem shared.10

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Rajendra Rout 09 May 2018

I agree with Kumarmani Mahakul

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Susan Williams 03 May 2018

Part One. Yes! Yes! Yes! ! ! ! ! You nailed this yes yes yes! It begins with a season / hot, dry, thirsty / feeding on nectar of hope- - -gorgeous! ! ! Rains shower like / a for life, - - ] powerful and full of impact due to your comparison! ! !

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Susan Williams 03 May 2018

Part Two. Dew Knocks so gently / on the door of the dawn- - - - ] the entire stanza follows this lead into such beauty. I swear this is the best poem you've written! It is absolutely filled with the loveliness and individuality of each season! 10+++++++++++ and onto my fav list! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 May 2018

THE FLOW of ur poetry is exceptionally exceptional ' it flows like the ' HOLY GANGES just lovely

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Hazel Durham 28 April 2018

I love this outstanding write with the beauty of every line, every word, your vision of the seasons is breathtakingly beautiful and thank you for sharing. Your poem is one of my favourites!

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Thanks dear Hazel for these lovely and gracious remarks. Many thanks for the deep love you have shown for my poems.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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