Sonnet Of Poems-08: The Seduced Moon Comments

Need to change often, remain fresh always A nicely penned poem.10++++ for the sharing

But have walked on the dry eyes, Lonely with the melting flesh In a world of silent blankness. Nicely penned. 10+++

Where moons have never slept- With lilies of their dreams, But have walked on the dry eyes, Beautiful imageries. 10++++

Poems, like dishonest servants and professional prostitutes, Need to change often, remain fresh always A nicely penned poem.10++++ for the sharing.

Very well written. And so true. I am never quite sure what I think about using a technique, a form, a way of wording so much that the author can be recognized even without his name attached to the work. Sometimes I think that is good- -other times I get a bit restless when reading a series or a book of one author's work because there is little variety and as you say clad only in one color of thought.. We need to keep our wings searching out a higher elevation of sky- but I think too that it is comfortable for both reader and author to have some solid earth beneath our feet as well! Well thought out piece here.