Sonnet Of Poems-01: Lost And Found Comments

With moist lips that never kissed. Nice one. Great feeling about a poem. 10+ for the sharing

On the day of forgetfulness, On the full moon of deserted beaches- That sing songs of melancholy Emerging out of sad huts with Lust darkened walls, and floors murky With moist lips that never kissed. Thank you sir for sharing this poem 10+++++++

A poem is A young lady love Lost in the crowd Of greedy eyes lovely poem shard. 10++++

On the day of forgetfulness, On the full moon of deserted beaches- That sing songs of melancholy Emerging out of sad huts with Lust darkened walls, and floors murky With moist lips that never kissed. A great poem with tons of lovely imageries. 10++++ for it.

Stunning write, so original and I love the exquisite imagery and the way you have expressed with the beauty of your words!

wow¡¡what a beautiful poem.sir i enjoy your poem.thanks for shairing...10++++

And found On the day of forgetfulness, On the full moon of deserted beaches- That sing songs of melancholy Emerging out of sad huts with Lust darkened walls, and floors murky With moist lips that never kissed. Nice one. Great feeling about a poem. 10+ for the sharing.

A poem is A young lady love Lost in the crowd Of greedy eyes A poem so nicely penned. A poem compared with lady love. 10+++

A poem is A young lady love Lost in the crowd Of greedy eyes Beautiful poem. Thanks sir. 10+++ for sharing it.