Saturday, May 7, 2016

Sonnet No. Eleven Louise Labe Comments

Rating: 2.8

Oh, the soft glances, O eyes full of grace,
Little gardens, full of loving flowers
Where Love's sharp arrows come in showers
Arresting my eye when I see your face.
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Tom Billsborough
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Seamus O Brian 28 June 2017

Wonderful read, Tom. I love the rich imagery, the showers of arrows, the gardens of the heart, the extended tension between the eye and the heart culminating in the final line. Great work, Tom! Bravo!

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Tom Billsborough 28 June 2017

Ah, you've found one of them. She was some writer! May I apologise to you and my other friends. I did my back in a few weeks ago (too much gardening!) so haven't read much on PH. But I'm feeling better now and will catch up with you in the next few days

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Tom Billsborough

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