Sonnet 'Memory' Comments

A beautiful poem, liked the lines I have a hope you will be mine and mine you are, Like the moon accompanied by the brightest star,

beautiful sonnet very nice

I have a hope you will be mine and mine you are, Like the moon accompanied by the brightest star.. Very nice poem. I like it's intensity

Step by step the longing for the beloved gathers momentum, the intensity grows and finally the longing ends. Nice flow

'tis an excellent poem! ! ! ! ! good work! ! ! Keep on writing! ! ! ! !

U were here with me like the sun of dawn. Awesome. Loved it.

This is beautifully constructed. The flow is excellent and I especially love the second stanza, I close my eyes and make a wish that this ends happily. x

g8 poem...how a special person drives away our emotions and makes us crazy...beautifully written..specially the last 2 lines...nice ending

Inspired write with great depth of emotions!

A great poem, like it.

when the glass is broken, the wine becomes sweeter!

lying here :) ing. what SIBLIME DEVINE feeling with which you wrote!

Ahh, what a talent! : }

oh! how lovely...a love sonnet with deep and true born emotions...a pure joy to read thank you for sharing sir, i love it love payal

beautifully written well describes your thought................true love tale and desire................

Superb.... Swept by feelings.... Having a universal msg behind, every person ll feel as if it is written for him.... U reminded me of myself as I saw my own story behind each line... The same yearning and hope to have uniformity... The similies are masterly handled and shows ur mastery over the art of poetry... U r poet by heart and poetry comes to U naturally....