Monday, March 4, 2013

Sonnet - Ix (Ah, How Thy Beauty Steals The Gentle Dawn) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ah, how thy beauty steals the gentle dawn
And full compares to twilight's tender glow
Thou art as sweet as summer's golden corn
And pure as winter's soft untrodden snow
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Valerie Dohren
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Unwritten Soul 12 March 2013

Yummy write..yum yum! ! ! hahaha I love this...the title again really captivating as much as the words inside..oh so beautifully written..i just loved it...i dont need to tell you are good everytime because we all know that, just your wording are really amazed us in each time you penned a new...you should consider to publish a set of poetry in a book_Soul

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Danny Draper 12 March 2013

Beauty to some is but a curse and yet it is a random gift as is each day, and in each our fragility should behoove us to savour each one come what may, and breathe and know that beauty is infused within in every way, and is as meliferous as this verse to smooth and guide its way.

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Hans Vr 08 March 2013

Another wonderfl sonnet, Valerie, I love it

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Payal Parande 08 March 2013

breathtaking, and bewitching...............bravo mam

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Chandra Thiagarajan 08 March 2013

Sonnet of sonnets! Such resplendent beauty now steals our hearts! A JEWEL OF A POEM!

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Valsa George 07 March 2013

Like people refer back to Shakespearean sonnets, the progeny may refer to Valerian sonnets! ! Absolutely beautiful! !

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Joseph Anderson 06 March 2013

Just mesmerizing with pure beauty.The phrasing is remindful of the master poets of the past. A reincarnation of poetry, at its best

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Jahan Zeb 06 March 2013

This piece has quality and standard. Lovely sonnet. I'll call it real poetic. Thanks for writing such an inspirational piece.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 06 March 2013

As beautiful, as always.

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Mary Forrester 05 March 2013

Absolutely beautiful Valerie.

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Theodora Onken 05 March 2013

Valerie, i am not sure why this site will not allow me to comment but i have made many comments on your poetry and tried and tried and they will not post! Made a comment on this particular sonnet and tried four times to post it. If, by chance this gets though, know that i am trying to comment! ! ! ! ! !

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Dave Walker 04 March 2013

A beautiful poem, like it.

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Of all your SONNETS this one is perhaps the best. You have poet`s edge over others when it comes to your sonnets of the kind Valerie..

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