Ah, how thy beauty steals the gentle dawn
And full compares to twilight's tender glow
Thou art as sweet as summer's golden corn
And pure as winter's soft untrodden snow
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Beauty to some is but a curse and yet it is a random gift as is each day, and in each our fragility should behoove us to savour each one come what may, and breathe and know that beauty is infused within in every way, and is as meliferous as this verse to smooth and guide its way.
Sonnet of sonnets! Such resplendent beauty now steals our hearts! A JEWEL OF A POEM!
Like people refer back to Shakespearean sonnets, the progeny may refer to Valerian sonnets! ! Absolutely beautiful! !
Just mesmerizing with pure beauty.The phrasing is remindful of the master poets of the past. A reincarnation of poetry, at its best
This piece has quality and standard. Lovely sonnet. I'll call it real poetic. Thanks for writing such an inspirational piece.
Valerie, i am not sure why this site will not allow me to comment but i have made many comments on your poetry and tried and tried and they will not post! Made a comment on this particular sonnet and tried four times to post it. If, by chance this gets though, know that i am trying to comment! ! ! ! ! !
Of all your SONNETS this one is perhaps the best. You have poet`s edge over others when it comes to your sonnets of the kind Valerie..
Yummy write..yum yum! ! ! hahaha I love this...the title again really captivating as much as the words inside..oh so beautifully written..i just loved it...i dont need to tell you are good everytime because we all know that, just your wording are really amazed us in each time you penned a new...you should consider to publish a set of poetry in a book_Soul