Sonnet - Ii (I Pray You Shall Not Leave Me In The Spring) Comments

With what picks of love must I deeply bore seasoned heart, that has coldly closed your door.

I love it, very moving Valerie.

And exhale................. My next assignment I think is going to be a sonnet. They are much trickier than you make them look. Always your pen flows with such ease and such grace! Inspirational my lovely lady. (I have missed reading you.) x

Another fine effort and I agree with Diane Hine regarding the last 2 lines, as a sonnet with that twist at the end is a splendid thing and adds a great finale of uncertain or different direction as achieved here.

Another fine effort and I agree with Diane Hine regarding the last 2 lines, as a sonnet with that twist at the end is a splendid thing and adds a great finale of uncertain or different direction as achieved here.

Love this Val [3 Very tenderly and intelligently written.

rhythmic poem beautiful read

Bloom bloom bloom bloom the heart in any season! ! _Soul

A beautiful sonnet with ab ab cd cd eg ef gg rhyme scheme.Loved very much!

...But if your heart never turns into stone, he will not leave you at all! As you won`t be reckless enough to get into such a phase, it is taken for granted that your seasons will ever be fine with love as your shade close to you. You are never going to be left alone.

I`m sure your heart would never turn to stone, Val, a sweet endearing sonnet

Beautiful and tender loved it........................................: O)