Sunday, May 26, 2013
Sonnet (Iambic Tetrameter) : How To Go To Heaven Comments
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The soul we bring when we are born,
Given by God to every man,
Is full of grace and not sin-torn,
And must be so, for one’s life-span!
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Aftab Alam Khursheed
26 May 2013
unstress and stress of syll.. followed nicely with a few non followed and you wrote perfectly if you can't be innocent like child then its evils bottle/ thank you wrote beautifully and for this 10
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8/6/2025 11:46:01 AM # 1.0.0
Very well written sonnet. Good rhythm and rhyme.