Sonnet I-Searching Eyes Comments
Eyes waiting for her swain's arrival
Peeps through moon lit paths
in the midst of solitude
eyes seek his glance......
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Fabulous poem from your pen. Eyes keeps on searching till they are not standstill. Loved it. I am surprised to see the date as Oct...2012...
In Vaisnav Padabali there's those lines- - - - - - - - Crow, eat my body, but don't eat my eyes.Because, thru them I''ll see Sree Krishna! Recently, a Bollywood Hindi song was written on the same thing.Actually, this an age-old lyric from a Maithil poet.Yash, has penned the theme wonderfully.
Kaga sab tan khaio are famous lines from classical Hindi literature. It's not my lines. Many poets have used these lines. I haven't used it in any poem but my comments on your poem.
Selfless love is the base of our society, what I think.It's heart touching dear.
Kaga sab tan khaio, chun chun khaio mas....Do naina mat khaio, mohe piya milan ki aas. A beauti ful poem.
Amazing poem! I really like it. You write great poems. (:
Again I think you did a lovely job here but I think as much as it is a good poetry it doesn't pass for a sonnet. Your piece of writing didn't meet the requirement of sonnet. Yes you got the 14 line count but you didn't observe the amber metre the abab cdcb hope you understand my stance. Apart from that you have a lovely poem here.
Eye is real lively mystery in this world.Nice poem Best wishes
Amazing matured writing at such a young age.. You will go miles... Keep it up!
good well done. an amazing poet you are. please do keep writing because you have greater hieghts to conquer
You came with the next poem and it not mean nothing less but equally beautiful...you are talented and i am sure of what i am saying_Soul
You came with the next poem and it not mean nothing less but equally beautiful...you are talented and i am sure of what i am saying_Soul
You came with the next poem and it not mean nothing less but equally beautiful...you are talented and i am sure of what i am saying_Soul
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7/18/2025 2:41:45 AM # 1.0.0
'in the midst of solitude eyes seek his glance....' - beautiful lines. A lover's see nothing but beauty.