Sonnet- I-Once Again I Betrayed My Soul Comments

your wisdom is profound your presentation sound thank you my friend-10

We do fall many times in life! But, we have to wake up and move on once again; with a positive mind. Nice work.

A profound and very strong message here, I liked this very much...wonderful insight and great wisdom.....

Very well thought and written poem, I liked it...........100 on 10.

It is not a sin to err, but it is a sin if you don't learn from your mistakes. By acknowledging your mistake, you have taken the first step. You have done no wrong

Often it is hard to stick to a resolution and this aspect of human fragility you have brought out so beautifully in this poem.

My own soul I shouldn't wrong, After being headstrong. .....Nicely envisioned. Enjoyed. Thanks. .......10

Beautiful flow of words. Wavering mind I should lock, And refuse every whimsical knock. Thoughtful message to be followed. Control self is difficult but for our peace and happiness, we have to be disciplined. Loved reading it.

My own soul I shouldn't wrong, After being headstrong. Nice thoughts.............10