Sonnet - I (O Shall You Love Me Through My Mellowed Years) Comments
O shall you love me through my mellowed years
When I am no more as the rising sun
As less my visage to your heart endears -
The sweetness age thus ever has undone
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A very beautiful and warm sonnet, written by a warm and beautiful poet, Val. I love the words forevermore.....such deeply felt meaning it does endure....
ab, ab, cd, cd, ef, ef, gg is the rhyme-scheme.Bearing the same fragrance like Shakespeare and Petrarch.Very beautiful!
A fine sonnet, and as explored the heart sees that which it desires, and in seeing, enduring love is oblivious to that desired in youth realising it is only truely endowed by maturity. A lovely classic structure and form.
A fine sonnet, and as explored the heart sees that which it desires, and in seeing, enduring love is oblivious to that desired in youth realising it is only truely endowed by maturity. A lovely classic structure and form.
A beautiful poem, age is just a number, I love my partner more each day.
Beautiful. Very lovely. Rhythmic, rhyming and has a beautiful flow. you have succeeded in giving your old days eternity. this really is a heartfelt write.
@ Valsa George... very right! ... a very neat shakespearean composition in the same meaningful 3 stanzas with alternate rhyme and a couplet is now producing a desire to have more of the same traditional flavour...i love not only Shakespearean sonnets, but preferably Shakespeare's own sonnets too...Love is not love which alters when it alteration finds! ! !
The appeal is clear and candid and this man in the sonnet will hopefully stand by you ever, be assured Valerie.
Like the Shakesperean sonnets, it seems that you have in mind a series of sonnets.(Shakespeare wrote over 156 sonnets) . Sonnet No1 is beautiful and we readers can look forward to equally good ones in the coming days!
Beautiful Val. I think I have leaky eyes again. Your poems so often evoke emotions in me
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8/3/2025 6:46:42 PM # 1.0.0
softly speaks the trials of love's refrain what's bound by youth may wizened age retain.