Saturday, February 23, 2019

Sonnet I Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nazi's are making their way back,
Another Hitler will soon rise.
Society will come to crack,
This will surely be our demise.
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Chinedu Dike 25 February 2019

An insight piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Forest.

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Julia Luber 24 February 2019

I don't think Forest King is correct about there being another Hitler on the horizon. I think this is paranoia, which sometimes works in poetry, and is nice to hear as candid in a poem, as it is an affliction that haunts many of us, but I don't think he is correct about there being organized genocide like his poem harkens.

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Kim Barney 23 February 2019

A good first poem on this site. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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