Monday, October 29, 2018

Sonnet - Guard Comments

Rating: 4.8

As I step out I see worship places as a lighthouse,
At every nook and corner and on the turning,
Worshippers standing patiently to step and browse,
What drives them to these doorsteps running?
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M. Asim Nehal
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Indira Renganathan 30 October 2018

A matter that disturbs most of us in general...your keen observation speaks with sharp and straight expressive words...a poem of necessity....superb Asim 10+++++

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Kostas Lagos 29 October 2018

Interesting poem to say the least! Makes you think...

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2018

Thx Much Kostas.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 29 October 2018

I fully endorse your thoughts, Asim ji. Almighty shall spare no one. How we think, act and live a virtuous life now will reflect on our future life. As we sow, so shall we reap. A meaningful Sonnet, which all should read........10

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2018

Thx much Geetaji for your enlightening comments.

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Dave Walker 29 October 2018

The crossroads of life can change everything, a great write

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2018

Thx Much Dave Walker

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