Sonnet For The Little Lamb Comments

From: Christopher Shepheard (Cheddington United Kingdom; Male; 60) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/29/2009 3: 21: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) I liked your 'Blood of the Lamb'; I liked the long lines and lazy rhythm, which suite the subject.

nice images and touching scenes 10

Always the blossom on the blackthorn and the lily is the same, And in the shepherd lands I stayed by thinking of Your name 10

You showed me all the sin I have and all I did in vain, And now my only wish is to stay, until You'll come again. And if I'm green and happy, even tired, and yet alive I am It is because white is my soul and red is blood of lamb...it is deep and plain feeling with nomalice in or at heart andtht is what matters intrue love...well done mari...so nice piece of writing....10

I must say it warms my heart to know there are poets who understand poetry.Simply wonderful! Thank you for sharing!

Beautiful... pure & holy poetry. God bless & keep you Marieta.