Wednesday, July 24, 2019

Sonnet For Mary Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love her enough to write her sonnets;
to use an unfamiliar form to woo her.
Rhyme schemes are like a bee in my bonnet.
If she were cold, I'd be a coat of fur,
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Thomas Case
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Denis Mair 17 June 2020

You do very well in the sonnet form; you have used it to make something all your own. TENDER BLOSSOMS ACHE INTO BLOOM- -this line is lovely and has true poetic flair. A 10.

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