Sunday, February 22, 2015

Sonnet For Humanly Vigilance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Liberties little components as rights
May so innocently erode and fray,
Our hill crumbling naively in repose
As complacently all's frittered away.
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Danny Draper
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 31 March 2015

A sublime poem written in a great way and the last lines ends it in an admirable compassionate didactic words. Wish I could manage a sonnet someday too. The rhyme is splendid as well. Great to read u again poet.

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