Wednesday, October 23, 2013

Sonnet For Essence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Faint aeons dimmed over far spreading bly,
Soft even light blanketed ground and sky,
A kindness where both day and night relent
And now exhausted land lies calm and spent.
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Danny Draper
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Susan Lacovara 14 November 2013

Your crafted caress, so vibrant, expressed...thank you for the enlightening note...I think I shall linger, here, awhile.

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Kevin Patrick 10 November 2013

Every word is composed together with fine finesse your not so much a wordsmith but an architect allowing it to smoothly flow through, and to top it off I found out a new word.

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Heather Wilkins 24 October 2013

beautiful write enjoyed the read

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Lyn Paul 24 October 2013

Beautiful words gracefully delivered. Poet notes were great. Really felt I was back in the past

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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