Friday, March 28, 2008

Sonnet - (For Daybreak) Comments

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At once I came awake in darkness knowing
That you were not beside me in the night
The fear within my veins a river flowing
Unstoppable as you might be in flight
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Gabriel SimpsonLaw
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Don Mcwilliams 28 March 2008

It's great to see a skilled poet work in traditional forms. This is very well done. Don

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