Once Sonnet Fever takes you to her bed
your every thought becomes expressed in rhyme.
You're in her grasp and cannot break the thread
which binds you to a mellow metered time.
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Great sonnet Thomas - I 've written a few myself which you may like to investigate - roll over Shakespeare! !
Tom- you filled this sonnet with great flowing lines of ripe imagery. How could anyone not agree? Pardon me, while I wallow through my envy- It was more than good enough
A great verse, thanks