Monday, February 24, 2014

Sonnet Fever Comments

Rating: 4.8

Once Sonnet Fever takes you to her bed
your every thought becomes expressed in rhyme.
You're in her grasp and cannot break the thread
which binds you to a mellow metered time.
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Thomas Vaughan Jones
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Dean Bottomley 27 February 2014

A great verse, thanks

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Valerie Dohren 26 February 2014

Great sonnet Thomas - I 've written a few myself which you may like to investigate - roll over Shakespeare! !

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Joseph Anderson 26 February 2014

Tom- you filled this sonnet with great flowing lines of ripe imagery. How could anyone not agree? Pardon me, while I wallow through my envy- It was more than good enough

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