Monday, March 4, 2013

Sonnet B Comments

Rating: 5.0

Calm and golden, are eyes and mind
All my moments, are full of hope
In thine loving eyes, love I find
Oh! Without you, I will grope
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Jahan Zeb
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Shahzia Batool 13 March 2013

an attempt to preserve the moments...no past and future tense apply here, time doesn't pass, it is eternal present there...

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Valerie Dohren 06 March 2013

Very romantic sonnet - some lovely thoughts in there.

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Unwritten Soul 06 March 2013

If we may shoot golden moon to be in your arms but the joy never same if you get the one who loyal and do love you in every breathe in his/her life...that is special thing about true souls_Soul

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Gajanan Mishra 04 March 2013

Having you with me a time divine. thanks.

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Alexander Coppedge 04 March 2013

Beautiful array of ideals

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Jahan Zeb

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