Monday, March 19, 2007

Sonnet, Amazed Comments

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I may not
Unthread our tapestries,
Unsay the years between,
Unmake your loss,
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Alan Dolan
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Josephine Dunn 18 July 2009

This is beautiful :)

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Sonny Rainshine 27 October 2007

Original use of negative 'uns' resolved by a final positive line. Good work. Cheers.

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