Saturday, March 3, 2018

Sonnet: A Day Of Days To Remember Comments

Rating: 4.8

How many days have I known you? I can't tell.
I do wish I could well count, those days of joy
When we shared much, forgot things that annoy,
The envy of many, and bliss seemed to swell...
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Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)
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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 June 2018

The memories of the April 2010 have been hauntingly and touchingly inscribed. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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Ashika Murali Acharya 05 March 2018

I prefer to read it as love ode. Beautifully penned dear poetess Before my age. If only I could rightly foresee That you meant so much; if only I knew how To treat you as you wished; I'd make the vow To be close, and from you should never flee. If only I could tell, I'd be all spray and bough.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 March 2018

It's an elegant poem! Sparkling expression: To treat you as you wished; I'd make the vow/To be close, and from you should never flee. I am delighted to read it again and again!

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 March 2018

A good attempt in the chapter of nature, Perdita. You may like to read my poem, Love and. Thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 March 2018

It's a lovely poem! You have brilliantly captured the pat memories! So beautiful expression: I tire of novelty, and feel old now, Before my age. If only I could rightly foresee That you meant so much; if only I knew how To treat you as you wished.......Appreciated the sizzling piece of poetry! .........10

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Perdita Young 04 March 2018

Thanks for the reading and commenting...I read the lines you quoted again and feel much encouraged.

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