Saturday, November 2, 2013

Sonnet 85: To Blind Jack Comments

Rating: 4.9

Blind Jack plays sorrowful tunes in the street
On his old accordion so battered
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Paul Brookes 19 November 2013

As a young man I spent a little time on the streets on one in their right minds would wish to do so out of choice You bring this to our attention and clear and unusual beautiful sonnet 10/10 BB

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Dinesan Madathil 10 November 2013

None chooses to be beggars themselves. We remain empathetic to the clan of Jack as we have to be humanistic ever. A poem that spells out a policy message.

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Lyn Paul 06 November 2013

Oh how we love the buskers and to bring us back to reality. They all have such style of their own. How interesting David.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 06 November 2013

It is sorrowful to be blind, beg. It is true one must be generous. We have to be generous to those in need And have a kind heart to do a good deed. I submitted a poem 'Get out! ' today, based on information shared by Tamil Writer.Jeyakanthan in his book ’Looking backwards’ and expressed concern over the poor Anglo Indian asking for money!

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Valsa George 05 November 2013

We come across so many such Jacks everyday! Inspite of their disability, they strive to eke out a living with whatever small talent God has given them! We should be very generous to these people! A sweet poem with a lovely message!

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Danny Draper 05 November 2013

Compassion and generosity are good traits and we should always share where we can. A good reminder from this interesting fellow.

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Heather Wilkins 04 November 2013

this reminds me of Bo Jangles in my country. A lovely sonnet with some excellent guidelines in it.

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Wahab Abdul 04 November 2013

there is lot of pathos behind the poem, love the well crafted beautifully rhymed sonnet...10

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Dave Walker 04 November 2013

A great poem, we get a lot of street musicians in leeds, it really makes the city centre.

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Queeny Gona 04 November 2013

Yeah I accept Sir. But then things have changed upside down. In most of the places begging has become a mere bussiness pushing the bright future of innocent kinds into this practice. You may please find time to read one of my works which speaks about the same Today's Children'

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Amitava Sur 03 November 2013

A good soul with sympathy for destitute came out in this poem with a smooth flow..... very nice

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 November 2013

Here in India many Jack We must take care of them Govt. must do something to ease and please them

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 November 2013

We have to be generous to those in need And have a kind heart to do a good deed. Beautiful thoughts and flow of compassion. You once wrote comment for my poem Compassion Flows in which a blind girl was singing melodiously at the street corner. Thank you.

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Joseph Anderson 02 November 2013

Dave- You show much compassion in this moving sonnet.Perhaps this will influence the fortunate to be more giving to the less fortunate-a worthy write-10

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