Monday, August 5, 2013

Sonnet 71: On Love Comments

Rating: 4.9

We have all had that Romeo moment
When something we said to our love went wrong
And then eat humble pie in atonement
And to go off and rewrite loves sweet song.
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David Wood
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Shahzia Batool 07 August 2013

an apt analogy is presented to love in Romeo-Juliet context, a new coinage of Romeo-moment...! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 August 2013

A Great poem..Love can be so easily forsaken when lovers messages are mistaken..Very Beautiful message..Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 August 2013

Let words not be misunderstood. Lover must choose words thoughtfully and lover must interpret words positively. If problem arises try to rectify. Love is a fragile world indeed. Beautiful sonnet.

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Heather Wilkins 05 August 2013

this is a lovely poem David. it reminds me of a quote which I have, , , not written by me. but one of my favorites. I will post it sometime. I know you will enjoy.

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Joseph Anderson 05 August 2013

Closing in on Shakespeare with your sonnets and getting better all along.A sorry, dear- sometimes works. A close to life, truthful portrayal of love's inner actions

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Valsa George 05 August 2013

A true lover willing to rectify the mistake, as soon as the realization dawns on him! A lover who regrets when he reaizes that he has hurt his beloved..... one who is willing to atone for the harsh words uttered! He is wise enough to understand....Love can be so easily forsaken When lovers messages are mistaken

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Danny Draper 05 August 2013

Commutation is the problem to the answer - 10CC, a fine sonnet.

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Dave Walker 05 August 2013

A great poem, I've been there many a time, all it takes is one wrong word. I wear the trousers but she says which ones.

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