We have all had that Romeo moment
When something we said to our love went wrong
And then eat humble pie in atonement
And to go off and rewrite loves sweet song.
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A Great poem..Love can be so easily forsaken when lovers messages are mistaken..Very Beautiful message..Loved reading it.
Let words not be misunderstood. Lover must choose words thoughtfully and lover must interpret words positively. If problem arises try to rectify. Love is a fragile world indeed. Beautiful sonnet.
this is a lovely poem David. it reminds me of a quote which I have, , , not written by me. but one of my favorites. I will post it sometime. I know you will enjoy.
Closing in on Shakespeare with your sonnets and getting better all along.A sorry, dear- sometimes works. A close to life, truthful portrayal of love's inner actions
A true lover willing to rectify the mistake, as soon as the realization dawns on him! A lover who regrets when he reaizes that he has hurt his beloved..... one who is willing to atone for the harsh words uttered! He is wise enough to understand....Love can be so easily forsaken When lovers messages are mistaken
Commutation is the problem to the answer - 10CC, a fine sonnet.
A great poem, I've been there many a time, all it takes is one wrong word. I wear the trousers but she says which ones.
an apt analogy is presented to love in Romeo-Juliet context, a new coinage of Romeo-moment...! ! !