Sonnet 64: Hidden Love Comments

The sun is setting The leaves fall-fall is setting in There's a slight breeze outside It's getting cold I walk outside to feel the breeze against my face I close my eyes and listen... I live in a world where there's so much life around me But for that moment I feel like I'm the only one The only one, and for that moment I picture myself in another place My Sanctuary I go over and sit on a bench and can hear the birds overhead My mind starts to wander Life wouldn't seem so bad as a bird They get to see the world I would like to see the world So much I have yet to see So many people I have yet to meet I open my eyes I go back inside Back to reality

Inarticulated love lacks the essential warmth. Love should be expressed openly so that those involved can recognize and reciprocate! A beautiful sonnet holding much truth in it! !

Love needs to be shown. Nice advice. Beautiful sonnet. Thank you.

A timeless truth revealed in this piece.

sweet singing birds, true love needs to be declared, good love, thanks.