Wednesday, March 28, 2018

Sonnet 62 - This Platform Of Desire Is Where I've Clung Comments

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This platform of desire is where I've clung
to echo all of it. Their prying eyes
immobilize this careful, timid tongue
of mine. Unstated words as cold as ice
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James Crieta
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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 March 2018

James, such a well penned sonnet....10+++++

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James Crieta 29 March 2018

Thanks for the compliment! I am happy to hear that. Cheers!

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