Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Sonnet 6 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Queen Beatrix' necklace is made of ivory
from all that whatever you wish
the bitter suffering of slavery
under attack by husky voice
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 30 October 2009

artistic! ...........

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Marieta Maglas 29 October 2009

''Queen Beatrix' necklace is made of ivory from all that whatever you wish the bitter suffering of slavery under attack by husky voice'' 10+++

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Obinna Eruchie 29 October 2009

Fascinating it is, it does not fail to grip with the mind. I agree with Fay.

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Fay Slimm 29 October 2009

Your sonnet pieces are filled with fascination Ahmad - and result in a mesmorising surrealism to the reader - you have done so well with them - - my congratulations - - 10 and more from Fay

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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