Sonnet.5. Smile Comments

sweet smile illuminates all around It fills the gloomy Earth with brighter light It can lift even those in sorrows drowned Making their murky selves joyous and bright........so true. Nice poetic expression with lofty theme. A brilliant poem is fantastically delineated that i have visited twice.

I read your poem, I read your note, I think it's a wonderful poem with a great message. If you can cause to make others smile You're scripting for you a better profile

A sweet smile! ! To bring joy to the heart. Thanks for sharing.

Noone thinks of syllables or rhyme when it is perfect.It's then exactly when the content shines as yours here, dear Lady.

Smile even though your heart is aching..Thanks for sharing

Smile even though your heart is aching..Thannks for sharing

Prescription of Smile therapy to get rid of so many ills through this meticulously crafted Sonnet is superb. Though it is simple and appears to be composed in lighter vein, it's contents demand quite serious thinking. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

and once again you have made me smile something I had not done for awhile reading your poem light up my day and my blues are all driven away Thanks Valsa

Sonnet is hard to write. You made it look so simple with a smile. Shakespearean rhyme scheme you followed is most popular and you did a great job in your composition. Thank you for sharing a smile.

Dear Valsa, you made me smile with your beautiful sonnet.! It is so wonderful to see a lovely smile on the faces of people. It illuminates and radiates joy all around. A big smile has to get a big 10. :)

Smile sparks light of love and wisdom in such an interesting composition. Sweetness of smile illuminates the first gloomy Earth around us. Making others smile is definitely joyful act. Lighting up face with Godly wisdom revives our faith and tightens humanity in relationship. Very interesting and excellent poem shared really.10