Sonnet 4 We Met On A Cross Road Comments

A refined poetic imagination, Sophy. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

On our way to classroom. Nice work.

The topic of this poem is definitely friendship but its meaning is better expressed by the word in the photo you chose, namely, FATE. This is not a poem which blithely assumes we can get what we want. It does just the opposite: it shows how even chance conspires with fate to keep us locked into a life we did not choose but must still live through. I have been reading traditional Chinese poems for fifty years, and your poem echoes a very famikiar theme of the final meeting, the parting of two friends. It is heart-breaking but so true to life.

Thanks for your comments Ratnakar, What you said is true.Good dreams give us good mind, but bad dreams give us bad mind so we all wish good dreams!

Thanks for your comments Ratnakar, What you said is true.Good dreams give us good mind, but bad dreams give us bad mind so we all wish good dreams!

Thanks for your coments Ratnakar, What you said is true! good dreams give us good mind but bad ones give us bad mind.So we all wish good dreams SophyChen in China

“I'd like to be a poet” eagerly I said With long hair dancing in the wind you nodded very nice imagination. your dream and the desire to become a poet. very nice. thank you

Enjoyable sonnet, dreams do bring people to mind while sleeping, fulfilling an unspoken need from living during the day. Wonderful poem, Sophy! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn.

Really a a nice sonnet. Liked it.

Sophy, I enjoyed this sonnet very much. Touching and well written!

a delightful sonnet, it's so nice to think of a fried you haven't seen for a while. A lovely topic for a sonnet....10

Dreams are celestial gifts to human beings. One can see anything and derive happiness while in a dream. Rational or irrational, practical or impractical dreams are our good companions.More over they liberate the dreamer from their influence soon after his awakening.