Wednesday, October 26, 2005

Sonnet 4: Love's First Kiss Comments

Rating: 2.5

If I for failure owe some higher price
Than kind, to quell love's thirst and passion's cost,
I say, I'd pay it gladly over twice,
For this, my first love's kiss, that I've since lost.
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David Zvekic
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***** ********* 26 October 2005

A sweet love sonnet on that oh so important First Kiss. Very nice work, if you can get it! lol Smiling Tai

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